These are actual topic sentences from Punk's second grade journal:
• Once an egg went to a gravely, dusty wall to think about life.
• The mother forced her innocent son to do homework - was she working for the devil?
• If you were on my imagination island, you'd look to the left and see a small, cabinish, wood tree fort on four stilts.
• It was Jimmy's first birthday . . . and his last.
And then there was the next assignment:
10 things I want to accomplish by the time I'm 30:
by Punk
1) Make a movie
2) Invent a robot
3) Go to Disney 10 times
4) See the Badlands again
5) Ride in an RV for 5 weeks
6) Go to the ocean with my family again
7) Play the Rampage video game again
8) To have a life-size model dinosaur
9) Put Camp Snoopy back up again
10) Own a lizard
And Kooka's version:
1) To have a job
2) To be a swimming teacher, or a gardener, or a teacher with a chalkboard
3) To learn to cook bread
4) To have a pet cat, even though I'm allergic
5) To work at Disney World
6) To have a pony, because I don't think we can find a unicorn
7) To learn to walk on a tightrope
8) To visit a place where real princesses live
9) To type on the computer
10) To live in a house by my mom, but none of the houses in our neighborhood are pretty, except for that pink one, so you guys will have to move.
Dear Kooka,
ReplyDeleteHow do you feel about camels? Princesses who live in the desert ride them. We have fancy camels- they have TWO humps, at our zoo. I think you should visit this summer. Love, Sara